Friday, January 16, 2015

Winter land

The Winter land
         One day there is a little kid hoping for winter to finally come, When she went to school she realized that she is the only one that is wearing different cloths then all the others. She was so embarrassed, she went to her home when school was over, she went to talk to her mom.

“Hey mom can I talk to you”?  asked the little girl

“Yeah sure” “what’s up”? said the mom

“The kids at school are wearing different cloths then me and I want to fit in” can you buy me those cloths and get ride of the ones from my old home?” said the little girl.

“ yeah I can. What do they wear other then cloths?” asked the mom

“ They wear normal cloths. Have you seen a show that is like the ones in America?” Asked the little girl

“Yeah I have but we can go shopping after we eat dinner okay.” Said the mom.

Finally they ate dinner and went to the store and bought some different cloths where she would fit in with the others at school. When she went to school the next day she was so surprised that other kids said “hey I like your new outfit and shoes.” She went home all happy and excited that she got come compliments about her outfits. The little girl and her mother was so happy that she actually fits in now then she did. She really never liked it at her new school but she knew that she had to stay there. They all knew that she was from a different country then all of the others.

One year later…

The little girl and her mother had to move back to there home town. Only because she was acting different. Her mother was very concern about her little daughter. Then she became a teenager and was acting her own little way when she was a little girl. When she was at school a new boy came and she felt in love with him, after a month of liking him she asked him out. She went to his house to ask him out.

         Then he said yes. And asked how did you find my house? Then the girl felt really curious why he asked that. Then they girl and the boy were happy and found a lot of stuff to do around their country. When the girl and her boyfriend were out, they found a really nice house that they wanted when they get older. The girl have told her mom about her first boyfriend. Her mom felt left out because the daughter was her little baby. And her mom are having a rough time with there family.

Two years later…
         It was at that time when the family got a divorce. The daughter lived with her boyfriends house, the mom lived at her moms house. And the father stayed at the house because he owned it. When they all moved to some other houses they got to do what ever they wanted, they were so happy. When they daughter wanted a kid her boyfriend did not want one yet because they were still in school. They wanted to wait until they graduated high school.

4 years later…
         It was about time that the daughter and the boy moved out and had a kid it was a little girl. The little girl looked just like her father. When they got home they all thought to themselves that they would not be safe here, after awhile of getting settled in the house they were right they were not going to be safe here, it became a really bad snowstorm coming in. It finally got into Cailfornia, when it got to the town that they are in it got even worse, they had to quickly move out and leave and move to their parents house.

5 years later…

When they got to their house they knew that they were in danger. There was a horrible storm coming. They lived by a lake where is floods all the time when it storms. Only because it is that time of year when it starts flooding so every one starts getting worried that their house will flood. When it was raining they were really scared because of all the thunder, lighting and rain.

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