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Awakening
I
was standing there—in the middle of Times Square. Rubble was everywhere, and
people were running in all directions. I couldn’t move, and my legs were
planted into the ground. Dust clouds were starting to surround me when I heard
someone calling my name.
“Skylar!”
screamed someone.
I
started running in the direction of the voice.
“Skylar!”
beamed the voice again.
Then
I felt arms grabbing my shoulders and shaking me—it was a dream. I sat up
rubbing my eyes.
“Wake
up! We’re leaving!” my sister Lilly screamed in my face.
“Get
out,” I screamed back, “And close the door!”
She
ran out laughing and without shutting my door. I threw my pillow at it to shut
it, but I completely missed. I lay back down and covered my head with my
blanket. Soon enough, my mom came in and started yelling at me.
“Alright,
alright, I’m getting up!” I said back to her.
“The
car’s packed and ready to go. We are leaving in ten minutes.”
We
are going to New York for like the fifth time this month, and I really don’t
want to go. We go all the time because we are only an hour away from the city.
It just gets boring after going all the time. I knew I couldn’t get out of
going, so I decided to get up and get ready, pulling on an oversized sweater
and a pair of jeans. I slipped on my shoes, and I was out the door.
My
parents were in the front seat talking about the latest episode of Criminal
Minds, while my sister, right next to me, was screaming all the songs on
her iPod. I decided not to bring my headphones, and I was immediately
regretting it. I tried to fall asleep, but I knew that wasn’t going to happen
with loud mouth right next to me.
“Mom,
can we stop so I can get breakfast?” I asked.
“You
didn’t eat?”
“I
didn’t have time,” I said back.
“Now
whose fault is that?”
I
hated when she did that. I didn’t answer, and I just stared out the window. She
turned around and looked at me, then went right back to talking to my father.
“What
if I starve and die?” I asked, with an attitude. “I’m going to die of hunger,
and you aren’t even going to care.”
My
mom didn’t even stop to look at me. She was definitely ignoring me; I mean it
wouldn’t be the first time. We were almost to New York City, and I knew this because Lilly yelled
that she could see the Empire State building. She gets so excited, even though, she has
seen it plenty of times.
She still sat there looking in awe at all of the skyscrapers and buildings out
her window.
We
got to the tollbooth and paid, then drove right through with the other five
hundred cars. We
arrived at our hotel and got out and grabbed our bags while the man took our
car to park it. Our hotel was right in Times Square—that is one of the only
things that I like about coming here because my parents let me go out by
myself.
“Skylar,
would you go get us ice please,” my father requested.
So
I grabbed the ice bucket and walked down to the lobby. I was filling it with
ice when someone grabbed my arm. I turned around quickly, just to find out it
was my sister.
“What
are you doing?” I shouted at her. “You nearly gave me a heart attack.”
“Sorry.
Mom told me to tell you that they were going out to dinner, and that you didn’t
grab the right buc…” She was cut off by someone screaming to get out of the
hotel.
Everyone
was flooding out of the hotel, and we had to go with. I grabbed my sister and
started running to try to get away from everyone, but it seemed like we were
running the wrong direction. My heart was beating so fast, and I kept tripping
over my own feet. I didn’t know what was happening, and my sister was hooked
onto my arm, crying. I handed her my phone and told her to turn on the radio to
figure out what was going on. She was shaking but she finally found the right
thing.
“There
has been report that Times Square has been set on fire. The fire is growing
rapidly,” the man on the radio had said.
I hadn’t even thought to look up, and surely,
it was on fire. The flames were quickly setting other buildings on fire—it was
like a crazy chain reaction. My breaths were becoming faster and faster.
Pieces of buildings were falling, and soon I realized that my sister was not
hooked on to my arm anymore. I looked down to my side. She was lying on the
ground with a giant piece of glass in her chest. I just screamed and dropped to
my knees. Most people were gone from Times Square—except for my sister and I. I
didn’t know what to do. My parents are nowhere to be found, and my sister is
dead. Rubble was falling around me, as tears streamed down my face.
That’s
when I heard the voice again and sat up in my bed.
I thought that it was very well written and had a nice ending. Very good PPOW
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