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Friday, December 12, 2014

The Hike



A group of friends are going on a hiking trip. The hiking trip is in the Rocky Mountains. The mountains were so treacherous it was so bad that they had to use a helicopter to get where they started hiking. The climb will be dangerous. They are climbing up the side of the mountain.
The friends were Billy, Jordan, Joe, and the leader was Troy. They were best friends through thick and thin. Nothing could break their friendship. On the first day of their hike, they were going through The Cave of 1000 Monsters. On the second day of their seven day quest, they were traveling through the Troll of the East to get across the bridge that hangs over the river of Doom.
On day third of their quest, they had come to a valley of flying bats. They beat them the same way they beat the Troll. They killed them all. So now, they were off to the Neverland Castle where they would get the The Great Sword. They had to fight dragons on the fourth day. The only way to kill them is with the sword of greatness. They were the worst dragons in the world.
It took them two days to kill them all on their quest. Now, they are going up the mountains. They were all climbing up the side of the mountain. They were climbing and suddenly, Troy looks back for his friends, and they weren’t behind him. He thinks it was the roaring blizzard that took them away.
He knew that it would take more than the days they had in their quest. He was not leaving without his best friends. The weather was harsh, but it was sometimes nice. The weird part was they were
looking for him on the other side of the mountain. They were trying to find one another. It was a long winter of trying to find each other. It was the worst winter of their life. They thought they were gone forever. Troy left the mountains.
Troy went on with his life and started a business and became a millionaire. He now owns four companies. The other three were trapped in the mountains. They were missing for ten years. They were making houses in the mountains, they were having good food to eat having a nice life.
They were still looking for Troy. They weren’t alone, they saw human footprints they knew they weren’t troy’s, they're too big to be his. They were scared that they were not alone. They thought maybe there was another person on the mountain. There was another person, a witch came by their candy made house.
She fattened them up. Then she tried to put them in her oven. But then the new person pulled out a shotgun and killed the witch. The world was full of demons and creatures. That’s what the man who killed the witch said. The man had no name at all. They came and lived with the man, and he has been there for twenty years.
The man said the same thing happen to him. The guys were baffled about the story. Now they were a team with the man who saved their lives. Now, it is ten years later in life and troy came back to look for them. He never found them and it brought tears to his eyes.
He will never get over losing his three best friends in the whole wide world! He has a good life ,but it will never be complete with out his best friends in his life. A few months later Troy ends up killing himself right before his friends come out of the mountains, and then his friends discover his body. When they got back to his house, they all got killed by the guy with no name. The guy with no name now goes back to the mountains. He awaits another group to kill.  The next, group is a team of agents looking for the person who killed all the guys. There is four agents.
Their names are Emma, Zoey, Mike, and Dan. They are the best team in the C.I.A. The team has solved more cases than any other team in the C.I.A. They have seen everything on a crime scenes. You name it, to murders and bodies. So, they set off and went on their journey. Just like the other people, they had a lot to accomplish. It took seven days to get where they were, on the way Dan took one for the team and went on the bridge that hangs over the river of doom.
He was walking across and one of the planks broke and he was falling. Mike thought he was gone for good. Lucky, Dan grab on to a route that came out of the cliff. Dan is climbing back up the cliff. Mike is trying to help him. Dan is so close to Mike’s out stretched hand. Mike say jump I can catch you. So, Dan jumps and mike mississ him by a inch. Now, they devastating because that was their leader.
Now they have no leader and They think they might go home. Well, that is just what they did. It took a long time to get back to the C.I.A. It took even longer to get over Dan. After, Dan died the team broke up and went their separate ways. Emma she became a real estate agent. Zoey she stay with the C.I.A. Mike now makes movies now.
He is a milliore now. He made a movie about his trip into the mountains. That was the start of his movie career. Then, it took off and he has work with Tom Cruise. He has work with many actor in the past years. The old team meets up again and all die.

The killer is the boss that they work for 30 years. I the end the boss goes to jail for life.   

Wednesday, November 5, 2014

free write 9/4

The Murder Mystery
Once there was a mother who hated her son. She wanted him dead. She had put that in her journal. The father read her journal. He has been plotting to put her in jail. The son knows nothing about it.
    The son think’s he is getting pampered because the father is testing his food before the son eats it. He also think his parents love him, but the mother does not!
The father is the only one that loves him. There is a girl that the son likes and will never get because he has down syndrome. The girl is from the richest family in the world. Her family owns five countries. The father called the cops. The mother heard Help, there is a crazy women in my house! The mother knows is he is talking about her. So she grabs the axe and hits him. Then he drops the phone.
He said, “He doesn't know what he is talking about.”
Then she hung up the phone.
She asked, “Why did you say there was a crazy lady in your house?”
So she tied him up. Next she put him in a chair. Then she went to find the son. She found the son in his room. He was so scared. She tied him up too. She told them a story about how she always wanted to kill them. She has wanted to do that forever, now she can finally do it. So there they are tied up five days. Day one was all about how she was going to kill them. She talk about all the ways she wanted to kill them, then it hit her. She lived on a farm, and we have hogs and after I kill you, I could feed you to the hogs.
She went on and on about how much she hated them. The father and the son were trying to get out of the chair but, she caught them, and then she had to punish them. So she shot the father in the foot. The mother made sure that they did not try to escape again so, she bought a lot of cameras. Day two was all about how she would fake her death after she had killed them. She had told them how she was going to fake her death. I’m going to burn the house down, and I’m going to be in the fire, and she is going to die in the fire. Day three was all about how she was going to skip town after she faked her death.
The town she is going to is New York City. Day four was all about how she was going to get there. She is going to use a train, car, and bus. The train is to get to Pennsylvania. The car is to get to New York. The bus is to get to my new apartment that I have bought. Day five was the day of the murder.
They were still tied up, but what she did not know was that the father has broken the rope, and hid the fact that he has broken the rope. The mother comes in the room with an axe, and the father attacks her. Now there in a big fight the father is winning for now. The mother throws him into a glass book shelf. The father is down and the axe is across the room the mother realizes that the same time the father does. They scramble towards the axe, and the mother reaches the axe first. She takes a swing, and the father goes down hard. She yells at him stay down! She hit him again. Now he is dead!
She turned her attention to the son and kills him. The next day the mother cuts up the bodys. She feeds them to the hogs. The hog have not been feed in three weeks. So, they were really hungry, and ate anything she threw. The father went first. The son was next. She watch the hogs devour them. The next day she set the house on fire and faked her death. Then she got on a train and went to Pennsylvania. She used the car like she said and used it to drive to New York. She got on a bus and went to her new apartment. She was just about to settle in and then the news popped on. The news was about her house burning down. She just sat a laughed. Then the reported said something that catches her by surprise. The reported said that the police investigator said that he found a shoe in the hog pin.
She was wondering how that happen. She did not care because they could not even trace it back to her even if they treid. She stayed up all night waiting until they stop talking about the shoe in the hog pin. They finally stop talking about it.
So, she was paranoid for a few days. Those days were over. Now she was living her new life. She went on to marry a millionaire. She lives in a mansion with him. Her new husband's name is Bill Gates. He is in love with her. He could not be happier. His wife is now Mrs. Gates. She is loving all the things that he gets for her. So far he has bought her a island, and named it after her. He bought her a yacht. She has everything under the sun. She could not ask for a better life.
Bill asked her about her old ex-husband. She she just dodge the question. Bill found her diary and read it. It said how she was going to turn herself in. Bill said to her that if you have problems, don’t worry, I’m the richest man in the world, and  I can make them go away. The next few weeks were rough. She kept telling him more and more about her past.
Bill still said that I can make them go away. I can clear your record. I know what you can do. I don’t want you to do that. You're better than that. So, she left and went back to her old town. Her old town was Council Bluffs. She used to live in north Omaha. Once she was back in the town; she turn her self in.
The punishment she was life in prison. She had a life sentence. She was charged with first degree of murder.