Jeff
Jeff
is a guy that works a normal job and has no family and is not wealthy, but that
was about to change. He went to work one day and he noticed the there was a
person that he saw on the side of the road and that guy seemed very familiar.
He seemed to look like his dad but that can’t be because his dad had died in a
shooting when he was eighteen. He was devastated by the loss because he was
closer to his father than anyone else. He did everything with him and he was
depressed ever since he died. There was something about this guy that seemed to
stick in his mind all day.
The
next day he was at the same spot on the road. So after a week of seeing this guy,
he finally went up to him, after he pulled over right by him. He walked up to
him and was instantly shocked by what he saw; that “guy” he saw by the road was
his father. At first he was in utter
disbelief by seeing his father. His dad immediately went up to him and hugged
him. He stayed there and talked to him all day his dad said to not tell anyone
that he was alive.
His
dad was a car salesman but what he didn’t know is that ,the chain of shops was
an undercover division of the F.B.I. . When he disappeared he was investigating
a criminal mastermind on the top ten most wanted list. This guy was very under
the radar and had people everywhere he was dangerous and if he wanted people
gone he had it happed. His dad was very close to finding out where he has his
base of operations, but he found out and put a hit on him and his dad was
thought to be dead by this guy. There was one question that Jeff had and it was
how did you escape and fake your death this long. He said it was because he
always has his car souped up with the latest spy tech. So he had a day earlier
he had a missile proof case put in his car and he activated it when he saw the
rocket. Their first mistake was to make sure that he was dead but they didn’t
so he waited, escaped and went into hiding. Jeff wanted so bad to have his dad
come home, so that his family could live in peace or at least tell his mother
or family that he is alive.
His
dad all of the sudden went nuts and said to get out and go far away. Jeff soon
noticed why, there were some cars that were coming they were big black SUV’s
coming at high speeds. Jeff knew why they were here. He accidently turned on
his dads tracker and he didn’t tell him. He knew that if he left it would be
the real last time he would see his father. So then he acted on the time that
they had to escape so he took his father and they went off the road at them but
they didn’t notice that it was them because his dad was ducked in the seat.
They went on a trip to the only other place that his father had found safe place
that was left for them anywhere else for them. It was a while till they got
there about two hours but his dad said that it was good because they had no
trouble along the way. They ended up in Topeka, Kansas. His dad had a shop
there, so when he got called on “trips” to anywhere out of town.
They
got there and his dad pulled up a panel from the floor that no one could notice
if they ransacked this place. Jeff was very shocked when his dad showed him his
gun wall. There was every gun under the sun. They grabbed some and they headed
out to the train station to be undercover and they weren’t, the guy had people
every where and they were on the train and had to make an escape, but the guys
pulled a gun on the train and opened fire on them. they quickly went to the
other car where there were less people. They got in to a fist and gunfight and
Jeff had dropped three guys before making the mistake of missing a punch and
getting a left hook right to the chin. Jeff recovered quickly but he was hit
right when he got up in the stomach. He got the wind knocked out of him. The
guys while he was dazed had beat up his father and had him in their arms. Jeff
soon realized that their plan was to take his father and leave him to die on
the train. They took him while he was knocked out and he was thrown out the
window and landed in the escape car for the kidnappers. Jeff tried to get to
his father and stop them from leaving but they dodged his punches and they
threw Jeff at the wall. Jeff was very dazed and while he was they guys had
taken his dad and thrown him into their getaway car and they were escaping.
They shot Jeff with a tranquilizer dart and he awoke with people around him and
his dad gone without a trace again. He exited the train and took a train back
to Topeka. Then he got an idea he was going to go to the secret shelter and he
was going to gather a plan go get his dad back from the guy. He went to the
computer that was in the room and looked at the files. He was very very shocked,
he saw the files on the guy and that guy was his grandfather. Then he realized
that would make perfect since his parents never talked about him and he has
never met him. He was going to try to get his dad back from his grandpa. The
only thing that he has on him is the fact that he is his grandson. The danger
is if he doesn’t recognize him he could die on the spot and that was the risk
he was willing to take to save his father.
I really like how this story told a lot about how this kid would do anything to save his father.
ReplyDeleteI wonder what would happen if you main character would be a girl or women? my favorite part was when you put the suspense at the end.
ReplyDeleteI like your story, it tells how this kid and his father in the situation they were in. My favorite part was when Jeff hugged his father when he noticed it was his father. I love your story Ben!!!
ReplyDeleteMy favorite part was when Jeff found out that his grandpa had captured his dad. I really enjoyed the story, and thought it was excellent.
ReplyDeleteI love your story. It was very well thought, and put together. My favorite part was, when he found out that his grandpa kidnaped his dad. It was a very funny plot changer.
ReplyDeleteI loved your story. I loved the end when he said it was a risk he was willing to take for his father. It really showed how much he cared about him, and how he was willing to save him even if that meant dying. His grandpa kidnapping his dad really made the story more interesting. This was a great story.
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