The Kidnapping
Meet
Lilly Dillard, she is the best detective in New York. She could find the
criminal faster than the criminal could finish his job. One day on the job a
new case came in. It happens to be about a little girl getting kidnapped. Her
boss didn’t want to take the job; he just wanted to leave it up the regular
cops. She knew the regular cops wouldn’t be able to solve this case. She
confronted her boss and said she wanted to take on the case.
He
said he wouldn’t allow it but she knew he had a little girl himself. She
mentioned it to him
“What if this was your daughter that was
kidnapped?” He didn’t reply. Just thinking. Lilly waited in silence for him to
answer the question. He spoke up
“Well
this isn’t my daughter that was taken.”
She replied back
“What
if she was taken tomorrow with no connection on how she was taken?” he didn’t
have to think this time
“Tell
the rest of the team we are taking the case.” He stated firmly.
Inside
Lilly was happy with herself about confronting the boss on this case. Lilly
knew she could solve this case with the help of the other detectives. She
walked up to the rest of the detectives or team and said
“Get
ready ladies and gentlemen, we’ve got a new case.” They all followed her into the conference
room. In there waiting was her boss John Baker. He said
“Sit
down everyone and Lilly will tell you about the case.”
Lilly
began talking.
“Well
team, there have been three kids kidnapped in the last forty-eight hours. The
kids are; Taya Johnston, Marcus Windle, and Jimmy Carter. They were all taken
from Brooklyn, New York but went to different schools. There was also another
connection. All the kids were walking home from school when they were taken.”
The team started to discuss if the kidnapper was after certain kids or just saw
them walking down the street alone. Then Mark, one of the people on the team
said,
“How
would this kidnapper gotten them into the car?”
James asked,
“Did
he use a toy or some type of pet?” John Baker said,
“We
will continue this in the car, now lets go!” Lilly thought ‘How would this
kidnapper lure the kids into his car?’ She was knocked out of her thinking when
her boss said
“Lilly,
what are you thinking so hard about?”
Lilly replied
“Just
think of how he could of got the kids into the car.”
Jenna
stood up and stated,
“Both
parents said their kids loved animals. What if the kidnapper used an animal to
lure the kids into their car?” All the people on the team we surprised she had
said anything since the incident, but that’s for another time. John was the
first one to recover and said,
“That
is a very good conclusion, thank you Jenna! So we figured out the kidnapper
used animals to lure the kids into the car; now someone call Grace and tell her
to search for anybody that just recently bought a pet out of the Brooklyn
area.” Commanded John. Grace is the woman that finds all the information needed
for the case on computers and in books. James took out his phone and started to
call Grace.
“Grace
has got it handled and she will call us back when she knows anything.” James
said.
“Well
team we have a few more hours until we get to Brooklyn, so sleep or whatever
you want to do.” John said. Lilly was
thinking so hard about the case; she didn’t even notice she had fallen asleep.
Lilly
woke up to James saying,
“Lets
go sleepyhead, we don’t have all day!”
She quickly got out of the car and
followed the rest of the team into the police station.
“Thank
you guys for taking this case; we haven’t had something like this in a while,”
said the head police officer. John replied,
“We’re
happy to help.” They were walking into a room known as the conference room. The
head police officer said,
“So,
how much have you come up with about this case?” John commanded,
“Lilly
take it away.”
“Well,
we figured from your reports from the parents that the kidnapper used some kind
of animal to lure the kids to the vehicle. We figured the kids were targeted
because he couldn’t just pull out a puppy and every kid would be attracted to
the puppy. The kidnapper could have also said he needed help finding the
animal.”
“What
if this kidnapper lost his child and is trying to find a kid that will fill its
place?” Said Jenna.
“That
is really good, lets start fr-“
“Sir, there is a lady that wants to
talk to you.” Interrupted the head police officer’s secretary.
“Okay, thank you for letting me know. I’m
sorry but there is other business I need to attend to.” Replied officer Tom.
“Okay
team lets go investigate the crime scenes.” Said John. Everybody packed up and
headed toward the black 2014 Chevy Tahoe. On the way to one of the crime scenes,
thoughts were running through Lilly’s mind ‘could this kidnapper have kidnapped
before, or was this his first time?’ ‘If he had abducted other kids, did he
kill them?’ She came out of her thoughts when the car halted to stop. Everybody
ran out of the car. There was a man standing there when they had arrived. When
they stopped, he started to sprint down the road.
Lilly
was the first one to catch and bring him down. They started to put him in the
car to take him for questioning when John’s phone rang. He answered and
listened to the call for a while. When he got off the phone he said,
“Everybody
get into the car, we’re leaving.” James was the only one, who had the nerve to
ask,
“Why
do we need to go back; we haven’t taken a look at the crime scenes.” John
didn’t even spare him a glance before saying,
“There
was a women that came in claiming her kid was taken eight years ago the same
way the kids were taken.”
It
became silent after that. The guy we found at one of the crime scenes kept
asking, “Do you have any kids, are they a boy or girl?”
“Just keep quiet!” commanded John angrily. The
guy was quiet the rest of the time, but kept a smirk on his face the whole
time. ‘He now knew John had a kid, but what was he really happy about?’ Thought
Lilly. When we got to the police station, Lilly could tell John was still mad
about the person at the crime scene.
Tom
knew it wasn’t time to mess around when he saw the guy walk in with the
detectives. Tom asked,
“Who’s
this fella?” Lilly answered,
“We
found him looking around the crime scene when we arrived.”
“Hmm,
thought you could tamper with the evidence did you?” Tom said, looking square
into the guy’s eyes. John didn’t even let the guy answer before taking him to
the interrogation room. Tom asked after John was out of hearing distance,
“Why
was he so mad when he came in?”
“The
guy wouldn’t shut up about who had kids and if they were girl or boy” James
sighed walking away towards the interrogation room. Jenna and Lilly weren’t too
far behind before Tom called out, b
“Jenna,
Lilly, I need to talk to you.”
Jenna
and Lilly started to walk back when a woman came rushing towards the
interrogation room yelling,
“That’s
my son…that’s my son!” Tom said,
“Ma'am
that’s not your son.” She just kept yelling,
“That’s
my son…that’s my son!” The guy looked up from inside the interrogation room
even though it is one-way glass. He looked like he recognized the voice and
said one word,
“Mom.”
Then he started to cry.
Lilly
let the lady come in and hug her son. John asked,
“Could
you please sit down?” John continued after they sat down,
“Whom
are you working for?” The guy didn’t say anything until is mom gave him a look.
“His
name is Jason Callow; he stole me when I was ten and made me help steal the
other kids.”
“Where
does he live?” asked John. Before the guy could talk John asked,
“Sorry I forgot; what’s your name?”
The
guy said slowly
“Kendal
Neem”
“Okay
Kendal, where did Jason live and could you show us where he lived?” asked John.
Kendal answered,
“Yes
and he only lived a couple blocks from the crime scenes.”
“Okay
Kendal, lets go!” Lilly and the rest of the team rushed to the house. They
found the kids and arrested Jason. They later returned back home.
Your story was great! I liked the way you had the characters talk about it and figure out what happened. When you had the kidnapper kidnap them with an animal, I thought that, that was a different idea, but a cool one. My favorite part was when the mother and Kendal found each other, so touching. :)
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